Way to ruin a perfect ending lol
Your drawing skills are incredible, you have a real knack for drawing faces. I think you could be more adventurous with your choice of angles, especially with the fight scenes, where I felt like sometimes you were taking the "easy way out" with certain action sequences. Great job creating an engaging scenario with visuals and music alone. The non-use of sound effects was bold but I felt it really worked in this case. The storyline was perfect, and I was moved by Nene's heroic efforts and the payoff at the end, except that you totally ruined it with your cruel joke at the very end with the newspaper lol. I guess that's pico day for ya.